WE ASKED:
“What's wrong with business-to-business communications?”
Respondents got to pick three of the choices below. Next to each is the percentage of the response it received.
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Now what did the folks at Starch say about bad b-to-b? Funny you should ask. These famous readership research folks looked into this issue by physically auditing b-to-b ads and concluded that business communications dont often make an effort to stand out, to be distinctive and involving. Business advertising, they say, fails to use three important creative principles of effective communications. Here are the details of their findings:
| 1. | Business ads are distinctly unvisual. Business ads tend to be more about content than appearance, Starch reports. Many use several illustrations and concepts in the same adas opposed to a single, powerful image and one unique selling propositionto get key points across. This could be due to the supposition that business-to-business advertisers expect their communications to be viewed by an audience hungry for information, and therefore willing to work for it. People will read [long copy] but they must be invited in [to the message]. And the best invitations use illustrations that delight the eye. |
| 2. | They emphasize the abstract rather than the human element. Business-to-business communications overestimates its viewers interest in their products, says Starch. (Enough said.) |
| 3. | They do not emphasize benefits. Says Starch: The one great failing in most business communications is the failure to tell the viewer what the product will do for them. The problem seems to be that business-to-business companies assume that readers are as interested in their product as the company is. This is rarely the case. There is no great secret to success. The key point to remember is that the best communication pieces are like a good conversation. All business communicators should remember the words of Benjamin Disraeli: The art of conversation consists of the exercise of two fine qualities; you must originate and you must sympathize; you must possess at the same time the habit of communicating and the habit of listening. The union is rare, but irresistible. |
The Mobium analysis
There is a general agreement between the impressions of business marketers and the three points expressed by Starch in their visual audit analysis. Mobium feels, however, that "visual interest" is not as top-of-mind for business communicators as it was to the experts at Starch, who were visually auditing ads. Additionally, the problem of “trying to say too much” seems to be more important to marketers.
The Mobium bottom line
If marketers concentrated on developing and judging business communications on the three points found by Starch, they might discover what their audience is interested in hearing and seeing. Marketers should try to focus on what they can uniquely contribute to this dialogue of interest to their customers and prospects rather than attempting to jam messages down the audience’s throats with the hope that they will magically imbed themselves in the minds of their intended audience. When you have a human dialogue with your prospects and understand what they are interested in hearing about, the issue becomes saying enough, not saying too much.
A Mobium thank you: Congratulations to the winners of the autographed copy of Emanuel Rosens The Anatomy of Buzz. We hope you put it to good use. Thanks to all participants. And for those of you who like to watch...

